I feel like it would've made sense to include some real examples. Otherwise this just reads very.. made up? :'D
Not sure how to explain, but the simplistic nature of the stories you use as examples make the whole text feel a bit like an angry strawman argument even though it probably makes some good points.
Yeah fuckin classic.
Especiay after the continuous mismanagement scandals in that sector. Navy helicopters not fit to fly over water was my favourite.