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[–] emizeko@hexbear.net 9 points 1 year ago (2 children)

it's clunky and awkward, but it does parse

"Norwegians facing a shortage as Easter nears" is the subject, with an extended adjectival phrase

[–] Lemmygradwontallowme@hexbear.net 12 points 1 year ago (1 children)

Norwegians facing a shortage as Easter nears are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden

We could phrase it more naturally like

Facing a shortage as Easter nears, Norwegians are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden

[–] RedWizard@hexbear.net 6 points 1 year ago

It needs commas I think.

Norwegians, facing a shortage as Easter nears, are hoarding eggs from neighboring Sweden.