As I have posted my in first post, here, >>>>>The one-problem with ‘Star Trek’ it is supposed to be exploring space & not interfering with other planets’ beings’ development, but it still has a lot of violence-wars.<<<<<. Let alone the rest of Space SciFi entertainment,
My idea solves that by instead of creating my Better Space, SciFi, Exploration Entertainment on military atmosphere & the experiences in any war(s)- I have no experience in,…
…but to base it upon, what have no experience with, the true scientists of all fields-explorers-peace makers-maintainers (& people needed for them to live, like those of their family that agree to go with them, but none of them have spouses-children of any kind-educators-doctors ), exploring the unknown-not known enough places of the outer space, with only truly defense weapons. Think of the diplomates, ambassadors & UN, but not dominated by 5-1st World countries/more Socialist & true all countries’ opinions-votes matters, no military atmosphere all, only defensive weapons & in outer space.
Their spaceships have the best possible forcefields, but if need be the forcefields can use the force put into the weapons absorbed by their forcefields back at the attacking spaceships, not to damage, but to make their weapons no longer functional & push the spaceships out of reach of their own spaceships, for as long as needed for their spaceships to escape, the attacking spaceships.
That is awesome, do start working on it!
Better is subjective. What you describe could well be one of the factions in the Star Trek universe. You are telling a story from a slightly different perspective -- an even more nonviolent one.
A good question to answer may be: What will make your story engaging to us all, in an age where so many stories have been told in so many ways?
WOW!!!!! Thank You, for such positive response & encouragement.
What do mean by better is subjective?
‘Star Trek’ universe is just violent & wars, for what I described to fit into it. Completely nonviolent, when you think of the fact that main Beings are non-violent, negotiators, & their ships would only have defensive weapons that can never directly harm attackers.
You really think the idea I summarized has been done before? I have never been a huge reader & read even less than I did as an HS student, but I never read-watch any entertainment comes close to what I have summarized. I no offense/harmful weapons anywhere, even on their hips, unlike both legendary Space SciFi entertainments.
Consider this scary thought, while I always think better of the middle-poor classes of people than most, has our world & our world’s entertainment become so violent-wars that there would not be a big enough audience for it?
Perhaps I have imagined it too, then, for it feels very familiar. Do go on, I am willing to be your editor, when time etc. permits. Engage! ;)
With all due respect, How good with English language are you? Not your fault, I have proven Learning Challenges that make English language & writing hard & truthfully makes me nerves about writing stories. Like I have said I am already in the most important story, I could ever write, for everything on this planet. I am also going to make all my stories interconnected, like TV spinoffs & movies beyond trilogies/3 & 6 (i do not what the correct terms are for them).
You comment writing is a bit rambling, probably a fast and motivated brain -- good! Make sure you keep an eye on tone and pace.