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[–] damnedfurry@lemmy.world 18 points 3 weeks ago (2 children)

This is two panels too long, imo.

Change the first panel’s text to “Forgive me, Helen, I’ve changed!”, the second’s to “Have you, Theseus?”, and you’re done, lol.

[–] x00z@lemmy.world 6 points 3 weeks ago

I needed the little punchline in panel 3 to remember it.

[–] Zozano@aussie.zone 4 points 3 weeks ago (1 children)

Who stop there? Make it one panel with stacked speech bubbles.

[–] damnedfurry@lemmy.world 9 points 3 weeks ago (1 children)

The punchline should be on its own panel to create a natural temporal gap between it and the setup, for the reader. :)

[–] idunnololz@lemmy.world 3 points 3 weeks ago (1 children)

insert joke of Theseus here

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